Thursday, November 2, 2017

Week 11 Story: The First Day of Summer

The people of the earth were in crisis.

It had all started during the night. Though the evening was bitterly cold because it was the dead of winter (as it always was), the men had woken up in the early hours of the morning sweating. They had to remove many layers before they could find comfort, and for the majority of them it was the first time they had slept with such little insulation.

Then in the morning, when the children got up and ran out to play in the snow, most of them came back inside crying. “Where is the snow?” they demanded. “How will we play?”

The more adventurous children were rolling in the grass and smelling the flowers that grew where before there had been only a thick layer of hard snow. They listened to the strange music in the air, which they would later identify as birds singing. They looked up at the sun, so much brighter than they had ever seen it, and marveled at the new light blue color of the sky.

(If this simply sounds like the arrival of another summer, you must realize that this is not the story of any spring, but the first summer. The earth had only known winter before this day.)



Eventually, the parents of the more hesitant children coaxed them into playing with the others, though the adults themselves were quite frightened by the warmth and the greenness of the ground that had always been white. As the children explored their transformed surroundings, they began to wonder why the earth was suddenly so different.

“I heard my father say this morning that he heard from a wise man who heard from a lynx that the sky was cracked open last night and we brought summer in from the world above us,” piped up the most daring boy.

“Summer?” asked his friend.

“It’s the warmth and the greenness and the flowers,” said the first boy, proud of himself for being so informed.

The boy was right: the night before, a hunter from a nearby village had gone with a lynx, an otter, a beaver, and a wolverine to a very tall mountain. The wolverine had jumped until he broke open the sky, and the warm weather and birds had come in from the world above the earth. The hunter and the animals knew that summer was very beautiful and comfortable, and they never could have predicted the scare that it would give the rest of earth’s inhabitants.

The heat, though it was only what we would now consider a mild spring day, was so oppressive to the people that they could hardly bear it. All their outdoor clothes were too thick, and they struggled to walk even short distances.

The ice used to store meat was melting. The birds’ songs were too loud and distracting to people who had only known the sound of winter wind. The flowers made the people’s eyes water and noses itch. And halfway through the day, children began to come home with red, burning skin from being out in the sun for too long.

Although husbands had been complaining to their wives just the previous evening of the cold making it too difficult to hunt, and although wives had been complaining to their husbands that they were tired of making socks and hats to keep the children warm, the people found summer to be an unwelcome visitor. They formed a council to gather up the warm weather and send it back to the world in the sky.


Clearly, the people of the earth never succeeded in returning summer to where it came from. To this day, we still spend our summers wishing for winter and our winters wishing for summer.


Author's Note: This story is a sequel of "How the Summer Came," which is a Native American story. In the original story, a hunter named O-Jeeg decides to retrieve summer from the world above the earth after his son begs him to. He travels with a lynx, an otter, a beaver, and a wolverine to visit a magician, who tells them that if they climb a certain tall mountain, they will be able to break the ceiling of the sky and bring summer down from the world above. The wolverine is able to jump and make a hole in the ceiling of the sky, and summer rushes down onto earth. O-Jeeg enters the sky world and takes the birds out of their cages so they, too, can come to earth. He seals the hole and is caught and killed by the sky people, who are angry that their world has been invaded, but he is happy that he has brought something wonderful to the world. For my sequel, I wanted to imagine how people would react to experiencing summer for the first time. At first, I thought it would be wonderful, but then I thought it would be funny for the people to hate summer and want winter back.

Bibliography: "How the Summer Came" from American Indian Fairy Tales by W. T. Larned. Link to the reading online.

Image Information: Spring in the meadows, Edinburgh. Source: Wikimedia Commons.

6 comments:

  1. Hi Sally!

    What a great story! Love that it was a sequel and I like that you made them a little unhappy with summer, because I feel like that’s pretty accurate! Everyone wants summer until it actually comes, then everyone wants winter because it’s too hot. I can’t wait to read more of your writing in the next few weeks!

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  2. Sally, I really liked what you did with this piece. I did get a little confused and had to re read a couple of parts. Make sure you use details and help the reader follow the whole story. I think overall it was very creative and was a great piece. I can not wait to read more throughout the semester!

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  3. Hey Sally!
    I thought you did a really goodjob with this! I freaking hate the summer personally. I would much rather it be 10 degrees outside than 100 degrees. My theory has always been that you can always put more clothes on, but you can only take so much off before it becomes illegal! I really liked reading your story! You are a great writer. Keep it up!

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  4. Hi Sally!
    This was such a great story, and such an interesting way of looking at the original. You're right, in a situation so new, the people would be terribly confused and frightened. And there is nothing worse than summer when it's here, and nothing worse than winter when I'm dealing with it. We should just flip flop back and forth between spring and autumn!

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  5. Hi Sally!
    I really enjoyed this story. I love how a lot of the Native American stories tell the story of how things are created, like in this case the summer. I totally relate to the ending where it says, "we still spend our summers wishing for winter and our winters wishing for summer." I like how you changed the ending to the people hating summer, because it shows that sometimes what you wish for isn't what you want after all. Great story!

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  6. Hello again, Sally!
    Once again great work on this story, you are such a creative author! Anyways I really enjoyed the way things turned out with this story. Since summer is always thought to be such a wonderful time I was really surprised when the people started to resent it, even though it made perfect sense. Summer is actually my least favorite season so I can relate to these people!

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